Review for Battered Hearts

Battered Hearts

(#) rickoshay 2009-04-18

Each chapter is a cliff hanger, You can't wait to see where you are going with a chapter but you stop before it is finished in each chapter. It is almost frustrating

Author's response

Sorry Rick,
It's a cheesy device that's been around for centuries - we're still waiting for Bill Shakespeare's Love's Labours Won. . .
The story want's you to come back and read some more,
it gets lonely. . .
N!