Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, but my laptop's harddrive went kerblooey. The way you wrote out the action sequences was excellent, and the plot seems to be developing nicely. I am, of course, eagerly awaiting the moment when bellatrix and harry have to band together, as so far it has only been working against a common enemy for short periods of time.
Good job, I look forward to reading more.
Author's response
Don't worry about it :) Thanks for the review :D. I'm glad you like the way this has developed so far :) And you'll get your wish in the next chapter, methinks :D My betas pointed out that I can't have them avoid talking any longer. I won't promise as to what'll happen, since the two of them have a way of running away from me, but they WILL talk :)
Chris