I like it. Harry seems to be eager to make a life and not dwell too much on the past. This is one of the better stories where harry seems to have 'normal' powers and just fucked over in some way. I like the flow, am eager to see what happens with him and the magical world and hope that this becomes a many-chapter story.
Author's response
I'm glad that you like it. In most cases I'm not one for "superpowers" Harry though they are fun to read. THe Magical world is still around but the twist I've given it, I honestly dont think that anyone has used. If they have, I rally dont remember reading it.
Anyway Keep reading and reviewing.
Rob