Once again an awesome start to a story. Honestly I enjoy both this and lord of war, this probably a little more. But if I could suggest I'd just start focusing on one and write away instead of doing a couple chapters each. It increases your own writing abilities admirably and creates a follower for a story.
At the moment while you claim you will continue one of your stories, there's nothing really to go on and it seems like there both one shots that you will most likely abandon like so many others have. Post away and get a following, then you will find yourself posting because you enjoy it! That's if these aren't ment to be one shots that is.