Review for Achieving Clarity

Achieving Clarity

(#) DarQuing 2009-04-22

I liked how the girls helped Lavender with her problem. I don't think we got to see enough of Lav to know how smart she was or what she was into, so this is a perfectly reasonable way to portray her. :)

I look forward to the next chapter. :)

Author's response

Thanx, to be honest, I wrote Lavender as any one of a thousand high school girls I've taught who found themselves desperately in lurve.
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