Review for Achieving Clarity

Achieving Clarity

(#) jjracer24 2009-04-22

Great chapter!!! I liked how it's now Potter's commandos and not Dumbles Army, never really was I think. Are you going to add the rest of the DA to that or keep it a small elite squad? Also, wasn't sure if you came up with it or not but I thought the King's Cross Express was quite clever. Keep up the good work and see you next time.

Author's response

Thanx,
I agree, it never really was Dumbldore's Army.
Potter's commandos will be a small, well organized squad. think of them as minutemen with wands!
N!

PS The Kings Cross Express, or Yule Express is all mine.