This was pointed out to me by son who said it is very good, and that hilarity could be found all through it.
I totally agree. I think it is a well thought out, plotted and written. And definitely "very" funny.
As a addendum, Ch.30, 5 minute passion. Yes, very possible. BUT! You have written that Harry and Hermione are almost completely "bonded", to the point that they can feel each others emotions. With that cycling back and forth between them, 5 minutes would only happen if someone interrupted them. But that's my opinion.
Thanks for a completely enjoyable read. I look forward to finding more of your postings.
May the MUSE always be with you!!!
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