Review for The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

(#) Elfwyn 2009-04-23

Oh, I wish you had put in the scene with the boys, but my imagination is pretty good. The break up of Harry and Kim was nicely done and something most high school sweethearts that go to different colleges have to you said growing up is hard to do...and most don't! lol

Author's response

I do kinda wish that I had been able to do the scene as well. Unfortunately, What I had written out just didn't fit with the chapter in any way. Also what had done really couldn't convey how much Harry was holding back and how badly outmatched the boys were.

Perhaps one day I will rewrite chunks of this fic to expand upon and flesh out ideas that are only barely touched upon.