Hi there Sas,
I'm sorry to see this story end. But what an ending. You got to see how Gerard was pyschotic in not knowing the difference from what was real and what wasn't, all stemming from the thing that was supposed to help him.
I loved when Mikey showed up, I knew he would make Gerard see the truth.
The last scene where Gerard is talking with Ray, Frankie and Mikey had me in tears especially the last line. Like they would always be there for each other. I'm still in tears writing this review!! LOL!!
A great ending to a great story I'm looking forward to your next original idea.
Author's response
Awww! Thank you!!! It never occurred to me that it might stir such an emotional response, but I'm thrilled to hear it did!!
I wondered if anyone would think it odd that Gerard suddenly started chatting with Frank instead of mocking him - but it was intended to show how confused he was. During the few minutes that he had started to believe that recent events weren't real, he just spoke to him openly and casually.
Thanks again for reviewing, as always and here's a bribe for you...
My new story's first chapter is going up any minute now. How about another chapter of Getting My Baby Back???? Hint! Hint!! :D
Sas x