awsome! can't wait to read more! i love the way you've written gerard. really camp yet utterly sexy at the same time. maybe you could develop on frankie and gerards relationship in next chapters. could possibly have something going wrong for them like mikey having a thing for frank? keep updating hun coz it's really well written.
lily white
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Author's response
Spank you very muchly for the suggestion. I really needed it! lolz!
I did have a thought about something going wrong with Frank and Jamia..... after she gets introduced into this of course. but a little Frikey would make my day :)
I hope you follow this through to the end.... whenever that is lolz
xox E