FicWad

Nicely done. Very nicely done. There were some typos and a couple grammar issues but overall it was well crafted and well told.

You didn't go overboard with some "Veela Bond" thing yet made it clear that Gabrielle was there for the long haul. I also liked how Joseph Delacour stepped in as Harry's champion just as Harry stepped in for Gabrielle.

One question though, does Dumbledore know that Harry was going to France or will it come as a surprise on September 1st? I do assume that Joseph's payment for Harry will serve as proof to everyone but Dumbledore that the protections are worthless.

BJH