Review for The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

(#) salam 2009-04-29

one of best stories i have read to date.
if you are looking for ideas send harry and his class to the future and have them meet the other famous captians,picard janeway,worfe,etc.and help out at crucial events till finally they get to go back to the correct time. for instance star trek voyager. you could have harry by a magical trunk.
if it had been hermoine stuck in the future all she would have done to check for traces of the wizarding world was to check her pockets.come on as it been mentoined she always was quoting hogwarts a history. self updating.she would have memorized a shrinking charmed and have all sorts of things in her pockets. harry by now would be thinking would would hermoine or ron do. he could by a trunk which because its the future could be outfitted to fit an entire haner bay as well as garages for cars and an armoury for vaser weapons . generators. food supplies.if he crosses with voyagers he would be able to supply them with enough goods to survive for longer. state that everytime harry and friends travel he picked up more things. in the star trek universe their was a section that monitered time travel and you could state they where the ones to tell harry to continue to travel through time. state that one of the academy's test was that students had to travel with a puddle jumper to a planet and threat it as a first contact event. meaning checking air.soli samples. living on the planet for a week under fill decom procedures . and on the way to the planet they fell through a black hole whick sends them to the future. to get back they have to keep flying through the hole.