Loved it all. Well, maybe not that Hermione was injured so badly, but it was off screen and it was just a nasty beating without anything unforgivable. So I'm cool with it.
Loved the fact that Harry isn't taking any crap from anyone, and is happy to dish it out to the toad. As others have mentioned, I like how you're working Snape into the story as someone who does more than just sneer at how arrogant Potter is.
Loved the eye for an eye retaliation. It really is good to read these smegheads getting what they deserve.
Loved the whole 'mothers kiss' concept and that Hermione wanted more, Especially loved that Hermione seemed happy to include Luna. Total win. 10/10 from me.