Review for You Stole My Breath

You Stole My Breath

(#) smilin_tj 2009-04-30

Hahahahaha!!! Just gotta say I love this story, I think I've reviewed this before, I hope I have. Anyway, just wanna quote my fav line in this chapter: jon and cassia are about to kiss and he runs his hand down her arm, then "cassia tits her head tenderly" hahahahahah that's so awesome, I'm pretty sure it supposed to be tilts though! Don't you just love those little finger lapses that change words and make a while sentence go completely wrong? Love it! Love the story too

Author's response

Yeah, there are a lot of typos in most of what i end up posting. I honestly, just don't have the patience to go back and proof read it.