FicWad

Yes, I was being facetious. The story text does not in fact show up at all in Firefox on my machine (Firefox 2.0.0.19 on MEPIS Linux 6.5); my comments were riffs on that (and I suspect that whoever rated the story 'illiterate' was obliquely making the same point).

I think it might have to do with your posting method, since your latest posting (DURSLEY) has the same problem. If you're able to see the story after having posted it... have a friend look at it, or use another computer; or flush your browser cache and release and reconnect so your IP changes, then try to read it again. Not having ever posted to this site, I don't have any specifics for troubleshooting, but something is obviously preventing the rest of us from seeing it.