wow! i love it! this is fantastic! the story was lagging a bit in the beginning for me--this is because when i'd come across it, i hadn't slept in about 20 hours--but now i'm wide awake and this is great!
Gerard, what are you doing! if id've heard MY lover in the kitchen talking about how much i was missing and lacking, i'd've walked in and kissed him right there! ray wouldn't've said anything negative about it, hw would've actually encouraged it.
and hello, loser! you're an EXTENSION of your father, like what pam anderson's grandfather once told her in real life. when you're an EXTENSION of your parents, that means you can choose to be a failure like your father or you can choose to do the opposite of your father.
gee, time's running out. you've got a little over a day and a half to prove to frank that you love him more than anytihng in the world. singing mariah carey is a start, but it's not enough, and you know that.
time's running out, kiddo, you'd better take frank out on a date he'll always remember, and make the most beautiful love to him you have ever imagined.
time's a-ticking, babe, and frank's gonna die again in vain, the same way he did before.
it's no use to tell someone you love them after they're laying in a coffin.
whitereflections12, you. are. fantastic. you're on my favorites with this story.
keep going.
i'm on edge here.
~mr gayestgoth.
p.s. i couldn't find the movie summary, so you've got my tongue waggling out over here. update sooooon, please! i love you! ^_^
Author's response
Sorry, I got behind on my replies. :)
Thank you so much for the wonderful review!
And I agree completely, I've never heard that quote before but I love it, the one about being an extension of your parents. That's really true, and the best any of us can do is try to take the good parts and leave the bad.
In some ways Gee's kind of frozen...he knows he doesn't have much time but he also doesn't like THINKING about that fact.
Again thank you so, so much and I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! ^^