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Mouth-watering chapter, love! I like how you dwealt in all the possiblities of Atlanta's behavior, very non-bias. And it really gave some more insight into the relationship between Archie and Atlanta.
"Herry slammed on the breaks as a car suddenly cut him off."
I REALLY adore your use of reality. It just makes the story go along so smoothly, and brings tons of ambiance to your work. As always, excellent chapter.
Author's response
Thank you, Mary-Lane :) Glad you enjoy this story so much and thank you for reviewing, your reviews are very enjoyable to read.
Thanks :) Well it has to be a little realistic... considering things like Greek Gods and such isn't reality. Plus I know the way my dad is with his truck xD so I used the fact that Herry loves his customized truck, in the story. Anyway, glad you liked this chapter and I should hopefully have an update tonight.