Review for Achieving Clarity

Achieving Clarity

(#) jump_jives 2009-05-12

Excellent chapter and I do like the way you are adding people slowly and not in one big rush. It allows everyone a chance to shine and the reader a chance to get to know the character.

Author's response

Thanx, Jump,
You know, I've left out some of the most important characters in the story?
The familiars.
Hedwig, Crookshanks, and what will Luna have for a familiar?
Gotta fix this, fast!
N!