Woah. That really was dark! But I loved it, it was so well-paced. Is it only a one-shot? 'Cause I'd like to see more, I really liked the way you wrote it. =)
Author's response
Yes, it's only a one-shot. I wish it wasn't, either, because I would like to continue it as well, but I don't really know how. Anyhow, thank you for the review :3 I have more stories coming soon !
And yes, macabre is awesome xD