This is good. Very good. I thoroughly enjoyed Luna tearing into Dumbledore like she did and calling him on his vagueries.
Neville and Pansy? Far out! I love it! He's quite confident now that's he's come into his own. I love the whole ivy tattoo thing, too. That's very sweet.
So Ron and Lavender are going to work out? Oh well, as the Ron fan, I guess I'm gratified. You haven't painted him as a complete ass anyway.
Potter's Commandos. That's really hot. The Seals of the DA. Woo hoo! Great Job, Prof! I'm excited to see more.
Author's response
Thanx again for reading and reviewing, really, it's the fanfic author's bread and butter - reviews keep us going.
Sorry for what happens to Ron in Chapter 8, but, hey, he's a typical teenaged male.
Having been one, I can empathies. . .
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