Review for The Unexpected Result Of. . .

The Unexpected Result Of. . .

(#) DtH4ever 2009-05-16

over @ WC4 there's an positve authors answer to one review requesting the continuation.

for my review, it's the same as over there. (gotta love copy and paste)



flame? why?!?



i'm sure you dont agree to pedophilia in real life, so one cant flame there;

the grammar and spelling are good, so no flames here;

and even if the whole plot idea gabby/harry bonding because of the lake, or the wake of the events there isnt exactly new anymore, you did it different then the others.



more chapters would be nice, but as far as i can see there are two main directions for your story to go...

a) PWP (all accept the bond, and harry likes being the one in control for the first time of his life)

or

b) detailed following of the reactions from the others in hogwarts and beyond



as the cab driver in Vampire:Masquerade says :"Where to?"