this was nicely written... but i can't seem to get over my annoyance and irritation of a hermione / ron ship... its just rubs me the wrong way...
don't get me wrong the long one-shot is well written and it certainly is fun to see the bookish hermione let her hair (and a few other things) down... but i can't get rid of ron mental picture from my mind...
congrats, and i look forward to more from you... hopefully more harry orientated stuff.