(#) NAPPA 2009-05-25
It was an interesting read. I think you masterfully avoided giving Harry way too much of the credit by creating a world where Hermione and Luna can overshadow him. I am certain he must have had enjoyed in this universe being less of a famous person than his wives.
I did think you were a little too harsh on Dumbles in the end. However, Rita was rather brilliant. I've often wondered how she was not already killed by something similar.
Write about Harry Potter in a epic nomadic battle for survival after an apocalyptic battle next .... :P ...... just an idea, but write something / anything. You're an awesome writer to follow.