(#) brad 2009-05-26
The notion of some students trying to exact revenge on Harry's friends in his absence was a realistic one to bring up and handle.
Happy, as always, to see our three favourite people together.
"... an increase in the crup population" -- oh DEAR!!! cringes
I appreciate your paying attention to the Elder Wand gimmickry but I fear your outcome here was unrealistic. Surely, at some time over his life - just ONCE - someone 'defeated' Harry? Disarmed him? Slapped his wand - ANY wand - out of his hand? Tackled him in a game of football? Beat him in a game of chess? ;-)
Nice to have seen another story from you. I hope your book does well!