Review for Harry's Second Chance

Harry's Second Chance

(#) JBern 2006-08-31

As always an enthralling chapter. I would have liked to see Greyback last a bit longer than he did in the fight, but that is a minor issue at best. Really enjoyed the blatent honesty when Lupin, Moody and Dumbles confront Harry about the murder. Very good job with the stark dialogue providing the atmosphere.

Author's response

It would have lasted longer if Greyback had known he was going up against an opponent with quicker reflexes than his own, but he had never had to face that problem before.

"T"