I liked where this story was going, until I got to this segment and Mad-eye Moody. He was never shown talking with an accent like that in canon, nor referring to Voldemort as the "Dark Tosser".
Too far OOC for me. Sorry.
Author's response
I appreciate your comments, Moody should have a Scottish accent, I guess I missed that part, but I think Dark Tosser would be a Moody-ism.
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