Aloah,
I realy do like Crossovers with HP, sadly there are only a few realy worth reading and not abbandoned.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter, maybe telling why Harry starts Hogwarts with the Age of 13 and not 11, why Hermione was reading "The Goblet of Fire" and maybe you could include some more dialog. Readin about Harry does this and then he does that..... it's not realy this encouraging....
BUT
of course, please continue with your story, maybe with an beta for grammer and content, but continue because I think that the story holds much potential....
Kind Regards
Shadow