Review for When Vernon Didn't Miss

When Vernon Didn't Miss

(#) taxzombie 2009-06-11

Well, finally finished reading. I have to admit there were a few times I nearly stopped reading as I didn't appreciate what you did to some of the characters.

Just about lost me at the start when you offed Hedwig. Got a soft spot for that bird.

Nor was I very happy with what happened to Mooney. And Sirius was at best a minor character and not exactly displayed in the best of lights.

Now that I've gotten through thrownign rocks it's time to throw a few roses.

Overall I found that I enjoyed this story. It's flow was such that I was kept interested. I enjoyed some of of the punishments you dished out. Must say that Vernon's struck me as just flat evil. (Good evil) To know for certain that the next time you fell asleep you wouldn't be waking up would be one scary thing to think about. Wonder how long he lasted.

Got a chuckle out of Harry talking to the Welsh Green. Who knew dragons were fane?

As for 'chuckles' and the exploding portkey, that will teach pure-bloods that they need to learn a little bit about muggles, at least about how we blow each other up.

I have no problem with Harry and Hermione being 'light-grey' as their horcruxes came from sources that lost the right to live. So at least something good finally came out of thier miserable existances.

All and all I found this an interesting and entertaining story. One that can't just be skimmed over. One has to pay attention to keep up with what is going on.

Well worth the time. Thanks.