HOLY SHIT!!!! THIS WAS FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!
I don't bullshit people either. So that's the truth. :)
I have to admit when I was reading that Brendon was all muscular and was thinking he could take her down easily and whatever, I was like 'okayyy, cool. thats cool', but than when it was like he's a vampy I was like 'ohhhhhhhhh I get it! That's awesome!'.
But serisouly, amazing start. :)
And I liked how you incorperated each character's hobbies into what they were doing. Very cool.
Reading all the couples made me smile. Very cute. :)
And it's no biggie on not including my description, dude. No worries. :)
I love this! Update soon!
-Natalie