Dude, that was an awesome start.
Paige . . . Dating hurley. . . I would've done the same except I would've probably slammed him into a concrete wall. Just saying.
Gabe and Natalie are cute, and everyone knows that (she won't let me forget it)
I can't wait til the next chappy
(And it has nothing to do with the fact that you will eventually elaborate more on beckett and I... NOTHING to do)
Anyways, great start, and much like Natalie said, we don't bullshit people, If I didn't like it, I wouldn't be writing this.
And yay for non typical vampy stories.
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Update soon
-Caro