Review for Holly Evans and the Spiral Path

Holly Evans and the Spiral Path

(#) paulblay 2009-06-16

"Sausage?"

Ron is getting all the good lines in this story. ;-)

More suspicions being sown with Hermione not being allowed to take politics. I suppose Holly and Divination may be to set the way for eventual revelation of the prophecy (or part of it).

Author's response

See, I don't feature Ron as this is a girl's story, but he still fulfills his function as comedic foil. All the same, one of my favorite lines is betwixt H&H:

"Hermione, do you have some special ability to control my cramps when I make fun of you?"

"Yes! You should be more respectful of me in the future."

Which was recently topped by the 'squick' speech in chapter 19. I'm so proud.

wh