nice work... though i was hoping to see a little more personal tragedy for harry. ow well, its how the dice role.
nice work on the whole for the story, yes, u submerged into the world of cliche a few times during that story (especially the ending and that speech, my what a speech) but overall i liked the ideas you played with. A very beautiful sandcastle was built on JK's very very long beach...
i only hope that it will not take another 21reviews to get you writing more (though i don't think that number will be a problem for you).
i look forward to your next castle, may it too stand the test of Caribbean waters.