Review for Achieving Clarity

Achieving Clarity

(#) LabRat 2009-06-18

A bit long for a oneshot, but all the better. I do have one thing you said that I disagree with.

**All I can say is thank God and the Goddess for fanfiction – where some really good writers get it right!
With patience and encouragement I hope to join their ranks someday.**

And just who the hell says you haven't already?

Really, that was a great read, and I might just have to try that roll of the dice bit. It does seem to make the story interesting. Only, I may do something with a reverse time and a coin flip on whether to change the outcome of certain major canon events (even though I'll still do them dif, the outcome will still be relatively the same).