I love it!!!!! I have been reading fanfiction for years, mainly since I decided that OotP sucked compared to the wonderful fanfiction universe, and this has to be the most original plot I have yet seen. The thing that really tipped it though was the spelling grammar and overall writing, many authors overlook this aspect but I find it refreshing to find an author who has dotted his i's and crossed his t's. I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter in this wonderful story.
the reader-Lucas
p.s. HARMONY ALL THE WAY!!!
Author's response
Thanks muchly for the praise. You know, it doesn't seem to matter how many times I go through my stories, there are always things that slip through. Even posting the story here and adding the italics back in I noticed a couple of errors.. Reading it over again last night I found a couple of other extra words that had snuck in after some editing. I had hoped my beta would get a chance to look over it, but haven't heard from her for a few weeks.
I'm glad you liked the plot - once it occurred to me I wondered why nobody else has already used it, as it seems kinda obvious now. There are a few where Harry gets some advice and suport in the room, mostly it seems to be avatars of the founders, or Hogwarts that appear, or a recreation of someone he knows, but I haven't read one with a fanfic reader.