Most amusing. I like the Mr. Who line and Harry's disappointment at making a noise on the deaddrop. Shows he's still learning. Malfoy getting smacked was great, as well as Snape's slimey character coming out. The fact that you have taken what Dumbledore allowed to happen in the school, in the books, overboard to highlight what was wrong in the first place is what I truly enjoyed the most, Harry's verbal smackdown of MacGonagall said it all. I'm just surprised loud mouth Ron hasn't made a reappearance. Can't wait for the brothers to be reunited.
Author's response
- Ron will be returning and his attitude explained 'in story'.