This WEEK! =D -squee-
Another excellent chapter, love.
I really adore the use of flashbacks in here. It really showed a more softer side of Atlanta. And the ending paragraph was wonderful, because I like the idea of the effects wearing off over time. =)
Author's response
Yes, this week. Well, if you count the long weekend-Monday as part of this week, which I do.
I'm glad that everyone, including yourself, seems to enjoy the Flashback, I know a lot of people dislike it because it's become overused over the years so I try to limit myself to a few of them, but I'm glad everyone liked it. I actually re-did the flashback, it wasn't quite what I wanted the first time around. But I figured, why not show the reasons why Archie thought Atlanta might like him? It was just an idea, experiment, and it seemed to work out :)
I think it's a bit more realistic, especially considering the fact that every now and then she seemed to be confused about what was going on. Anyways, I best be working on that chapter. I had no time to yesterday (slept in, seems I was a tad ill... still am, but I'm living :) ) so today's the day. I have to hurry, before the movies start... we have FOUR. FOUR I TELL YOU! ...lol okay, enough rambling for now.