I've just started to read your story. there are a view things which doesn't make secence to me. How come Holly and Harry aren't in the same year and why isn't Harry going to Hogwarts. If Holly is the same age as Hermione then why isn't Harry in the picture instead of being writin to in the journal.
What I've read so far is very good.
Author's response
Thank you for your review! Keep reading; some answers come out further along in the story...
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