(#) Vanir 2009-07-02
Very interesting. As for critique, i have to say that you could add a bit more detail, some more flesh to your rather inventive bones. Sometimes it feels like you weren't quite done with the text before you published. Nevermind. It's an enjoyable read as is. I like the new connections, i like the mindscape and i really like the wands. Yes, Super!wands are a staple these days, but staples become staples for a reason. The Scion-title was great, and i can just see Harry insist on it from annoying people. Like an insult to others that they themselves have to say. He seems the kind. I'm eagerly awaiting your sorting.
Vanir
Author's response
Vanir,
Thank you very much for the review, i always appreciate an honest opinion! I know super wands are a staple in many ff's now but i wanted away to briefly introduce flamefire, to the story as he will be important later on.
I'm quite pleased with my mindscape, i think that it has a lot of potential.
The scion thing had been done before but i liked it as a way to annoy malfoy.
I am very pleased with my sorting (coming next chapter). I think i have managed to get a fairly origonal idea for it.
Thanks again, seeds