Review for Things Not Spoken

Things Not Spoken

(#) Ardwynna 2005-12-15

This was a really well-written look at Tseng and Elena's captivity. There was just the right amount of detail and emotion and it was tasteful. Most other attempts to write about this that I've seen so far as just using it as excuse for some violent non-con, which is fine if that's what you want to read. Somebody had to put some dignity into the situation though, and I think you did it very well.



Author\'s Response: Thank you! It was kind of a tough piece to write, because I really did want to touch on how much they must have suffered, but I also didn't want to just, you know, write torture fic. I like the characters too much to want to strip them of their dignity like that. hugs them