Ok, am I being oversensitive or are you considering Dudley/Hermione? You'd certainly get points for originality...
Well, I enjoyed the chapter quite a bit. I'm going to have to go back and reread the potion's effects on Harry, because I've completely forgotten the details of that.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's response
On the Dudley/Hermione... It did cross my mind. That scene was supposed to be something else, but it kinda got away. I had other plans for Hermione, but I'm not certain what she will want to do.
Thank you for all your wonderful reviews :)
Chris