This one one of the best chapters yet in terms of dialog I thought.
"Weird, eh? The things you believe you want and then when you get them, you really don’t." Ha! For real, huh!
And the bit about Death's hair and Apathy being very good at his job? Brilliant. Loved it.
Wow, thanks!! Dialogue is an area that I know I need to improve on and this really cheered me up! Thanks so much!!