ok, not to be rude, but it sucks. ummmmmmmmmm, thers this siote called emobucket, stick that on there, cuz i'm sure we all don't want to hear about poetic sucide.
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Ok, to begin with, anyone who starts with "not to be rude" generally is doing just that, but that's not the issue here.
Second - Just to clarify a point - I am a perfectly well adjusted adult, not an emo kid who sees the world in some sort of depressing light, you only have to read any of my other stories to see that.
A moment's research would have told you that, but then obviously, I can't expect that.
Also, it's clearly not poetry. It's meant to be exactly what I said it was - my take on a note that might have been written, referring back to when Gerard tried to commit suicide but eventually didn't - you appear to have missed the point. But that's okay too.
I'm sorry you don't like it, but then, everyone is entitled to their own opinion.