Well, to me, it was as clear as the nose on my face.
I like the way it was written, it was nice and short. It didn't drone on and turn into crap.
Excellent job.
F oxox
Author's response
Thanks Fin! I really appreciate that!
Yeah, I was concerned about it being only a few hundred words long, but it felt right for what it was.
I'm really glad you liked it :)
Sas x