Sas, this was awesome. Having been in a similar situation I thing you're right that someone might make some vain attempt to explain but fail (I never even wrote a note) and it might sound like this.
Oh and to vampyGee - I find it fascinating that you thought this sucked and thought it was "emo". What are you, 14? You obviously don't know shit about the world ... or writing for that matter. I don't usually call people out but Sassy's one of the best writers on here and she's not an emo kid.
I guess it's expected for sparkly vampire kids like you to think they know everything about everything, but you need to check that attitude, "not to be rude" of course.
Author's response
Thank you C! You know the way I write and, with this, I put a lot of effort into getting myself in the mindset of someone that down. And given what you've shared, if you say it feels like it could be real, I'm flattered.
Thank you too for standing by me and for the stunning compliment you paid me. My jaw dropped when I read that - especially when I (and dozens of others) would have said exactly the same thing about you! You have totally made my day! Thank you!
Sas x