Emobucket? Sounds like.. patheticness.. Considering you're obviously a better writer than she is I don't think she has any room to speak about what crappy writing is.
Anyway, I just thought I'd mention that I posted another one-shot and I think it might be interesting? Anyhoo, looking forward to whatever else you write ^^
REVENGE
Author's response
I read your one-shot. I can't believe you took it down! It was excellent! Sad but not overly dramatic. Also, the take on it having been an ex-girlfriend who died is quite underused, so good choice!!
Loved it!
Thanks again for reviewing - it means a lot!
Sas x