Hey I love your story and normally I was bug you about the late chapters but then again I saw your a/n note about being back in the states, so I guess you had a reason for not updating...
These background chapters are cool and all but how about everyonce in awhile going back to the present time and explaining what harry is doing as well as everyone else!
And whats this about him and narcissa, hell he ought to enslave narcissa and then hook up with hermione... my experience with women is that if you are friends with her before you become lovers then it is way better...so with that in mind he and hermione oughht to be great together and also from my experience the bossy ones are usually the exact opposite in bed...hehehehe!