Review for Pieces Of Me

Pieces Of Me

(#) chocolatechortle22 2009-07-24

so this is my 5th review but im bored and reminding u, you ned 2 update sorry if im a little impatient but this is such a good story and i really wanna know what happens but in the meanwhile i am going to just say what i THINK is going to happen. So William being a little suspicious goes over to Ryan's house and finds Kelsi there, and he gets all pissed at Ryan.then william and kelsi start yelling at eachother and get into this big fight then she suddenly gets that pain thing again but A LOT worse. bad enough where they need to take her to the hospital so they take her to the hospital and something dramatic happens like she loses the baby. but she lives then her and william make up. But the shes now all depressed bcuz she lost the baby then- yeah i dont know the ideas just started flowing. i think i watch to many movies i think thats where this all came from. so yeah update please for the 5th time :)

Author's response

El Oh El, Sorry for the lack of updates...been working on a collabo story with PoeticTragdy...but you're getting vewwy warm with your apprehensions about the story. I'm glad you reviewed, it makes me happy to see someone is reading it. But I AM working on POM, dont worry, yo!
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