I agree with alot of what was said so far by your other reviewers but what they dont seam to see si that you can turn draco in to a superpower if you fill like it.
I do have to say that harry/naricassa is intersting but I the long run is it relistic I mean she could be a powerfull partner for harry but the pic that you have painted of harry is one of a person that isent trusting except for hermione. that is not to say that you couldent make it work but I see it being alot more realistic if it came to be a relationship of convience. have you thought of not haveing the traditional relationshp but rather haveing a frinds with binifits allalliance with harry/naricassa. also I agree that harry/hermione would be more likly because she would be more likly to be trusted and seen as a equal do to her bilty with magic that you have given her or at least understanding of magic. personaly I would like to see this be a harry hermione/ naricassa. I would realy like to hear what you have yo say if you would respond to ryanguinn1217@yah oo.com