Very amusing, I must say. I hope you decide to lengthen the chapters into at least two scenes. Your individuals are fairly long, but nowhere near chapter length.
Looking forward to more.
Author's response
I tend to write in bursts or as I get the time. I have some other fics that are longer chapter wise, but I haven't really started posting them yet. Honestly, I have been having too much fun with the ones I have been posting here. I am working on another ch for The Rest of the Story as I type.