Well, for a harry/hermione this story isn't bad. It's a reasonable way for the tale to have developed, that being said you've fallen into the trap of ron/ginny bashing. I've always thought ron was there as comic relief. As for ginny, well her mother was fertile and had more kids than hermione's mother did. Of course that's such a crass thing for someone to say that few other than a gay male would say it... Hope your hermione has lots of magical kids, looking forward to the rest of the story.